Feed back from rough cut

There was some disagreement over the range of camera skills, the audience regarded them as very good but in terms of technicality there is lack in range however this is a stylistic choice, and I'm not sure if im prepeared to sacrifice the vision I have of the video to introduce extra shots purely to gain marks which would then conflict with the rest of the video. The filming whilst driving recieved good feedback and the intergration of the boys face (which i'd drawn on photoshop) recieved very positive feedback due to its link to the lyrics and the surprise nature of it. Overall the lyrical links recieved positive feedback although more general "journey" shots could be used and the flames could be replaced with a better fire shot. Other improvements include the fact one shot of night traffic went on for to long however feedback said that the in and out of focus on this shot was good.